What stood out that was important is that I clearly define what the product is for the clients and customers. One of the classmates that reviewed me doesn't golf and didn't understand what the product was clear enough. It's also a new product so many people familiar with the game may have also been confused. I didn't receive any wrong/silly feedback. The comments that had feedback were mostly constructive and helped a good amount.
What I changed based on my feedback was mainly my attire and my energy. I decided to dress a little more appropriately for a business speech. I decided against anything more than a dress shirt because having worked in the golf industry before I know that everyone from hourly employees to the top execs, that most of the time they wear more casual attire. I also found a place that I could record myself while standing. I believe this helped me present my pitch with a little more energy.
I thought the presentation was very well done. You spoke clearly, and with the appropriate amount of information. I don't know much about golf, but your idea sounds like it could be useful, and make playing golf a little more interesting for people who aren't used to the sport. If you want to check out my elevator pitch, about creating a better WiFi network on campus, I'll link it below.
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Hi Christopher. I don't golf but have always wanted to so this product would spark my interest to get out there if I didn't have to go out for hours. I think you dressed appropriately and spoke clearly and with enthusiasm to get the interest from people. Good job.
ReplyDeleteYou presented yourself very nicely for your elevator pitch! And you spoke very well and did a great job explaining your idea. I actually grew up following my dad around the golf course every weekend so I know a lot about golf. I'd really like to see a picture of what you want to come up with so I could get a better mental image. It's an interesting idea! If you want to check out my elevator pitch, you can here: http://kenny-o.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
ReplyDeleteI think that your pitch was good and the way you enunciated your words was very good as well. The only problem that I have with your idea is I'm confused about where you would put your golf clubs. If this is a skateboard type device, I'm not sure how they would fit. Other than that, great presentation! Check out my blog at http://thekigelreport.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
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